Monday, June 2, 2008

Eight year olds should go on the computer

We are learning to write an argument that will persuade the reader to agree with our point of view. We need to include:
· An introduction which states the problem and tells our opinion,
· Reasons for our opinion,
· An ending which restates our opinion.
The first one we have written is about what needs to happen so we get a fair turn using the computer at home.
Eight year olds have trouble getting to use the computer at home.


In my opinion the oldest should go last so it makes sure the oldest does not take all the computer time. I think eight year olds should get a turn.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

That's what I think too, Albie. It's a very good argument, but 7 year olds should have a turn too!!
Joe R