Eight year olds should go on the computer

We are learning to write an argument that will persuade the reader to agree with our point of view. We need to include:
· An introduction which states the problem and tells our opinion,
· Reasons for our opinion,
· An ending which restates our opinion.
The first one we have written is about what needs to happen so we get a fair turn using the computer at home.
Eight year olds have trouble getting to use the computer at home.

In my opinion the oldest should go last so it makes sure the oldest does not take all the computer time. I think eight year olds should get a turn.

What Central School Means to Me

I like going on the computers because there are so many thing to do. They have lots of games. We have been learning to put our poems on a blog. People can read them all over the world.

The Legend of the Willow Pattern Plate

209 years ago in China lived a girl called Koong-se. She wanted to marry Chang. The mandarin wanted Koong-se to marry a Duke.
The mandarin built a fence so they could not see each other. One night Chang sneaked in and got Koong-se. They ran across the bridge with the mandarin chasing after them. They got to the island.
One of the soldiers saw Chang and Koon-se .They caught them. They were going to kill them. The gods turned the lovers into doves.